All Comments on 'There's Always a First Time'

by Simon J.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Very hot slave girl awakening

It's totally interesting to me that you wrote this in the first person. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
great start

start was Great! but you jumped too fast to the Master/slave relationship...............

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