All Comments on 'There's Something about Sarah Ch. 03'

The story line, characters and scenery are very believable. One can see that a lot of thought went into this story. The last scene is probably the worse thing that could happen to a special girl like Sarah and it brought tears to my eyes. I do pray she finds love and happiness in life. Looking forward to chapter 4.

- liz

That was... difficult to read. It actually reminded me of when my brother outed me to his friends (but without the rape) as far as the emotions Sarah was feeling. It seriously felt like something that could actually happen, and probably has. I have to say, this shredded me.

Just wanted to see if you have plans to finish that story

the last part that was just wow i have a feeling that slaone is in some deep shit when she gets home if she does some home and drew what a gentleman and knight in shinning armor i did kinda see the end coming but not exactly what i thought would happen one of the best stories i have read so far i on the edge of my seat for chapter 4 keep up the good work

Yes, very believable. Other comments were spot on. As a dressed girl who got looks, smiles, honks from passing cars and even invited to a party I was so afraid this very scene would happen to me.

- K

Came here planning for a quick orgasm before bed but you ended up making me cry..

:'(