by boneams
Jesus, you got me hanging on the edge of my damn seat. I need ch 8
I love to hate cliff-hangers. Good story. Waiting for the next chapter
this really is the perfect time for the reveal. Just when I was starting to think the shit needs to hit the fan soon, SPLAT! Kevin only reveal himself when his back was to the wall and he gave very fair warning to both Adam and Kristen. What Kevin doesn't know is that daddy Luca is on his way! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
I'm so glad I started reading this story when ch1 was posted. Its quite a change from the typical Were romance stories I usually read, which I enjoy & appreciate. Looking forward to ch8.
(One critique there were a few typos I noticed, he instead of her was the common one.)
~LadySilverNova~
Thank you Lady nova for the catch on the grammer. I'm really trying to get better with that. I went over chapter 8 a few times to try and make it the best one yet. You all don't have to wait soon. It's in the review cue and will be out in a few days. I can only get better with help.
Will Luka be lured and then captured by Radovan or Viljem to be used against Kevin or will he arrive in time to help his son?
if i didn't know there was another chapter ready for me to read i'd simply say one thing :
MORE ASAP!!