by chezshirecat
well I'm not surprised about that. LOL that Jack turned out to be Sarah's son.
Even though Sarah confessed everything to Luke, there is still some questions....
Very good writing - deep - detailed - well conceived.
Keep it up - we receive the married consequence you detail as part of life's reality. please don't lose the balance.
The whore wife blaming Riley is just Bullshit. It was Sarah that told Luke NOT to come.
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It was Sarah that shut Luke down and wanted to have dinners and lunches with Riley.
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She loses the Baby refuses to get help lies and manipluates
Luke so she can fuck Riley.
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Run Luke run
Her decisions are what allowed Riley to fuck her. Don't blame it on lonelyness, horniness, or alcohol. Her decisions put her on her back with another man between her legs with a convenient excuse. Then you write: She'd never wanted anything or anyone more than for Luke to be a part of their family. That is just BS. Now your story is becoming unbelieveable. You are well on your way to just another of your weak endings. Please don't let it happen.
anon jerry
So far it all seem like the situation is Sarah fault, all she had to do was keep her legs closed and listen to the husband that she supposedly loved. anon jerry
I am surprised by all the comments calling Sarah a slut wife. Have any of you had a miscarriage? Loosing any child is hard, but miscarriages are hard on women. Not saying that her actions were "right" per se but she was obviously dealing with some heavy bouts of depression and was being manipulated by those she considered friends. She didn't set out to cheat and it was one night that she regretted instantly.
You write really well and the story is fascinating too. Well done