All Comments on 'Things Heat Up Pt. 02'

Thank you for sharing. This is really good. Somehow you can just feel the love rising as we progress through the story! Please continue!!!

Hi!

I'm glad so many has already read this new story. And thrilled about the high Rating.

But I'd be even happier if you could leave some comments on what you liked (and disliked) with it. Its really useful for me as a new writer.

Thanx.

Your building of the characters, the hint of something awry in Sarah's past, the gentle progression of their relationship... all excellent. Please keep writing. I'm working on getting past the grammar stuff... my problem, not yours. Thank you.