All Comments on 'Think Tank'

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ToadenToadenalmost 6 years ago
Good

Good stuff. Good writing. Different concept. Keep it going please and thank you kindly.

ender2k2kender2k2kalmost 6 years ago
That was really really good.

I thoroughly enjoyed the story. Interesting characters and plot. I wouldn’t even mind a next chapter if you were so inclined. It isn’t needed because there was a very satisfying ending. But the characters are well defined enough for another tale about them. Thanks.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyalmost 6 years ago
Really enjoyable

Look forward to next chapter when they face Lazarus together.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Good stuff but there are some missing scenes like the fight scenes between Lazarus that detracted from the flow of the overall story.

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