All Comments on 'Third Date'

Outstanding

Great story!

But... I thought you (or your character) is an editor? Then you should have spotted the "who's head" instead of "whose"! ;)

i hate this language.

Good writing but rape doesn't do it for me. It just sort of makes me sick to my stomach

I've actually read it a couple of times now. But.. the ending upsets me. I just feel bad for, well, both of them! I hope they are both 'happy' in the end :)

Sexy, dark and poignant. I'd love to read more of Simon's adventures. How did he acquire his power and how did he come to use it in such a despicable way?