All Comments on 'Third Time's the Charm'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Excellent Detail

Excellent detail of the action. A reader could almost see them going at it. If this story doesn't make a man hard, he has no interest in sex. Please keep writing. You are good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
another wannabe writer

if you are going to write a series then atleast have brains enough to properly title the chapters. when writing a series ALL chapters HAVE to have the same title just numbered to tell what order to read them in. get a good editor and rewriteand retitle all your stories and NEVER do this again.

DBRS

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Cool!

And just which part of West Virginia (or is it Kentucky?) do they live in?

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