by Leenysman
Took me 35 yrs to find the right one. Pls, another part or 2. Excellent story, keep on!
I like your story as my own life followed almost the same line. I asked a young lady to dance with me at a bar, she declined due to the fact her then boyfried was with her. 24 years later we met on the west coast and started to talk and I then found out that she was the very same person that had refused me all those years before. We have now been married for over 20 years and are still making out like 18 year old students. Yep good story "L" and give it a five as it was sooo close to our lifetime.
A nice romantic story.
It almost begs for a second part, particularly with the ending as is. Will Amelia get to school on time..... :)
Thanks.
This was a very lovely and quite tender story, not the usual bang stuff you come across in this category - might actually fit the romance one better. I enjoyed it so much I hope you make a sequel or even a mini series out of it in the future.
5* are a given!
Call it Kismet or fate or spin the Wheel Of Life but things either work out or they don't and like the ripples in a pool, once the stone drops, nothing can stop them. I really liked both main characters and how they got to this point in their lives and the idea to continue regardless of the cost because to not try would be ignoring those ripples. Very good story, twists and turns like life serves us all. Cheers