All Comments on 'This... Ch. 01'

The introductory chapter suggest the potential for a great story. It's well crafted. I will be waiting with bated breath for more! Five stars!

Unless the dual capital/lowercase is very important to you, please drop it. It is very annoying for most readers. There are many other ways to indicate submission and dominance.

I've got mixed emotions about the start. At the core, I'm wondering if her assertiveness now means she'll be one of those psycho bitch dommes later. My worries aside, it's a very interesting start. It was especially good how easily you slipped in the fact he had prior experience, implying knowledge and ability to consent. I look forward to more.

A great start with a lot of potential! Looking forward for the next chapter.

Hmmm, do you get bored easily Lee?😉 Your usual promise is there but I would much rather read further chapters of life in the matriarchal worlds you created in Blue eyes and First day. With their sagas still so unexplored and fantastic characters slowly developing my heart skipped a beat when I seen new material from you only to discover.....’This’. Please, don’t make a man beg,😂

Anyone with a submissive nature will love this - I know I do. I very much hope you will continue this saga.

An incredible start Mr. Lee. Every day from an year I have been checking your profile for a story and atlast you made it. Thank You

Need more and frequent stories from you. Your matriarchal worlds you created were awesome and please continue them also along with these

Curious to see where you'll take the story. You're writing is vey good

But barely a beginning.

Has real possibilities.

Love this story. Reading it again. Very realistic or it really happened. 🙂

Short, sweet, and HOT!