by Turned
you would find a different category for your stories. Really, this type of story deserves a category of it's own.
Once again this is a well written and exciting story about a married couple. He has fantasies and he enjoys sex more than she does. I think he provided Ron with too much info and instead of going bad to the bedroom to be with his wife he remained reading his erotic stories. I can only assume what she may be thinking with what he said to her while making love to get up and go into the bathroom and lock it. Thanks for sharing this well written story.
This kind of story does deserve a category of it's own. But until the powers that be create one, they will keep placing them here, in the war zone known as LW. The disclaimer is the best I can do. Sorry. As I have the freedom to write what I like, you have the freedom to ignore it.
To echoe the others, well written, can't wait to read next chapter. Would be interesting to see it from wifes viewpoint a little. Well done.
idiot readers that keep telling the author to ignore the negative comments. Hey stupid, the author can read for himself, doesn't need your two penny advice. Got it! And yes I agree with one comment, this doesn't belong in "loving wives" but the powers to be on this site don't have any idea how to put stories in their proper category. Never have, never will.
Plenty of sex, but I like the depiction of the relationship as well. Alas all too real, but kinda horny too.
I think I am going to like your series. I get this sense of familiarity when reading your work.