All Comments on 'Thoroughly Loving Nina Ch. 08'

This is a very good series and I will comment further when I finish the whole set. For now though a little "constructive criticism", you need to get someone to proof read you stories Egmont, the are several spelling mistakes an on more than one occasion you get names mixed up. You have called Kate Nina and Nina Kate several times in this chapter alone. I am not putting down your writing skills here as I am not that type of person, I am just saying they a really good story could be great with a little "polishing up" to get rid of the confusion.

Unlike most people who criticize I am not posting as anonymous...

Keep up the good work!