All Comments on 'Those Eyes Alone Ch. 03-04'

some mistakes here and there but i love this story i dont know why ...

but this is not a 'chap. 03-04' it's just a chap. 03 - cheata'! Lol - just kidding! Seriously though, this last installment was not long enough to claim it was two chapters. It's barely one chapter. Interesting story so far though. I'm looking forward to seeing if Nathan has anything about him and hope he comes clean to Keaton so that he can move on with Trystynne.

Understand where ur going with the story but we need more to read. I was thinking these chapters would be longer.

I really like where this is going... I'm hoping Keaton didn't get any pre-cum and won't get pregnant... That would piss me off so bad... Great job!

-Bizzy

You guys have been really great and encouraging in the proccess of this story. I'm trying to keep you guys intrigued with my writing and I have some great ideas going and I hope you guys like it. I write the chapters before I post them and I try to make them long but they don't seem to be as long on here as they are in microsoft and paper. Thank you guys and please keep reading

I really love this story, and im praying for keaton not to get pregnant- i already dont like her. Awesome job!

Smart man tying up loose ends

Nathan excellent thinking get rid of Keaton!!