by dreamsofbirds
you just had to stop there. Why, O Why :). I hope to see another update very soon. O, by the way you have awesome detail and an interesting story plot going on here, It's like I'm watching a movie.
Thanks for the awesome read, Shanee
Thanks for the new chapter! It is getting to be really interesting, apart from the sexy appeal, that is! Keep up the good work!
That was fantastic. There is some real good quality writing.
I like both characters, I liked the changing perspectives when they weren't too repetitive. I could really visualize the club and the atmosphere. I definitely want to find out what happens next.
Questions- Why didn't Ash come to find her? He invited her but then didn't look for her all night, even when she sent someone to tell him she was there? What's up with that?
The worst part of finding a great series; finding one in progress. uhh... I forgot, Please!
Now how cool was that for a cliffhanger...... I LOVE IT!!!!!!
I was wondering why Santana didn't notice the impairing effect of all the alcohol--she's had several shots and at least two cocktails, remember--but regardless of whether she's a vampire, a lycanthrope, or something else in the same vein her body would be able to break down alcohol at a much greater rate than a human.
Still not quite sure what they both are, but I'm content to read on and see. :)
I normally despise alternating first person, but this is awesome. Definite 5 from me. :)
You are incorrect when you say it has been completed we have been waiting for months for the next installment although you will enjoy all the chapters you haven't read yet they are awesome!