All Comments on 'Those Eyes Ch. 06'

I hope he didn't lose his wallet back at her old home. That could lead the hunters straight to them. I like the way this is developing so far. It's nice to have at least some answers at this point.

Keep on posting to put me out of my misery. lol

Hello all,

I wanted to add that I mean no offense to anyone who majored in communications. Also, I wrote this at 1am while babysitting. I was pretty tired and haven't looked at it since so, I apologize for general suckiness like errors and such.

SRB

Oh, you are so wrong for leading them right to her.

Good thinking about the wallet. I was thinking it was her fault, but nope his. Love it Please hurry post soon. And screw the errors. If the story is good enough people can over look so much!! And yours is wonderful.

So damn good. Next chapter already!

waw, sooooo nice! please continue!

Good. You can write your ass off. I liked the sex scene and it was perfect for them. I'm sure your gonna heat it up even more when they mate. I like that he left his cowhide behind bcuz now the shit is about to be on and poppin.

J

I'm so glad I decided to catch back up w/your story. I am still amazed that this is your first series. Actually chapter one was your first submission. You have a talent for telling a story!

wow!

your doing great, i'm going onto the next one now!

i wonder what the signifacance of his missing wallet is???

keep it up there!

k_k

He somehow dropped his wallet at Santana's house, and they wake up in full-body restraints or something. Let's see if I'm right. ^^

Me thinks the wallet be back at Ana's childhood digs.....oh wait.... that's the next chapter....maybe....lol...lol.

I can't wait!!!