by cd_donna
Absolutly peak production in the seamen factory during and after reading this amazingly sensual and sexy story. SUPER SUPER SUPER EROTIC and mouth-wateringly descriptive ! If I were to make one improvement suggestion it would be for more detailed physical discription of all three characters...ie hair, eyes, face shapes, builds, figures, asses and especially she-cocks.....but of course my hyper aroused imagination filled in quite a few of those gaps as I read ......there's never a fire when you've got a fire extinguisher load ready to deploy LOL
You are right in the critique. I worry a little about having everyone be beautiful, but I guess I don't have to. Once the sex starts and continuous to build, I know I don't care what my partner looks like, just that he is my partner. I guess I do close my eyes much of the time to focus on all the other waves of feelings while being intimate. I am working on the next story, and the first section ** Getting Ready ** will add more of that detail. No body is perfect, but I enjoy my athletic one.