All Comments on 'Those Words: Longing'

I'm not exactly sure what to say in response to this. You took all the words with this amazing story. You captured the longing and taking of a first time so perfectly. This is the best erotic fiction I have read here in awhile. It is what erotica is supposed to be. Please continue this story or just keep writing in general

Beautifully told....it was almost like reading prose which made it better and worked well with the theme of teacher/student. I really enjoyed it.

It is light on character development, yet they are not card board people. There is intensity between them and it is erotic. The professor's view would be great to have.

With you descriptive abilities, it would be great to have future stories with more depth and development.

In the sense of writing as a craft, you have a first-class command of English. But you also capture the feelings that many of us had in the heat of fewer years and higher testosterone.

wonderful buildup, the longing, admission of desire from both sides, sweet tender, well crafted. your revision has paid off. keep going

This is superbly done. Thank you! I certainly look forward to more and I'm delighted to hear that you plan to continue their story. So many of your readers know all about "longing" and to experience - through the scenes you so authentically and passionately describe - a young man finally able to give full expression to such deep longing is a real treat that had me rock hard throughout. Thanks again. Bravo!

Agree with all of the positive comments posted previously. Have read your later postings and will look forward to a continuation of this story. Your descriptions are really excellent. And the sex was hot. (Always important for erotica).

THIS IS MY FAVORITE BOOK ON THIS WEBSITE AND IVE NEVER LEFT A COMMENT EVER BUT FOR YOU IT HAD TO BE DONE -- THIS IS AN AMAZING PIECE OF WORK AND I WOULD BE SO SAD IF THERE WASNT A SEQUEL TO THIS OR SOMETHING PLEASE CONSIDER WRITING MORE PLEASE

and got it!!!

sorry, dude - the condom spoiled all the excitement.........