All Comments on 'Threads: The Island'

I totally agree with the previous comment. Bring it on!!!!!

Need more and more of this tale man. Couldn't put down my smartphone until I finished this entirely.

Waiting for the next part. Let it be unleashed soon.

The best writing 've encountered on this site. This could easily be extended into a full length novel. Katie and Kara need to tell their respective stories and, of course, that would give Kyle the expoure he richly deserves. Congratulations!

Wonderful tale, more, more, more!

Sweet story and very interesting. Wouldn't mind catching up with Kyle, Katie and Kara. Now that would be interesting!

I totally enjoyed your writting ,Please continue on this story line. thank u

dude.... hve u got some serious skills!!!!

I almost cud have swore I was reading a jeff archer bestseller.. u r that good!

keep it up, n keep posting!!

Will you be continuing with this story? I'm dying to find out what happens next!

This was an excellent read. Interspersed with excellent sexual tension, was mystery, romance, and a finely woven novella about a family coming into their own. The creative story line with a setting that promoted all the fine elements was not just intriguing, but compelling. Well done!

Thank you very much for your story. It kept me awake for quite a while; had to see what happened. Had a lot going for it and I really liked it.

I hope you continue and we find out what happened to all of them.

Thank you.

This is every bit an equal to, and a worthy companion to E L James "Fifty Shades ..." from a male perspective ... and still with all the attraction for either a male or female audience. It was inspiring to read your blog re thoughts and concerns for commercial publishing. Just as this episode, "The Island", elaborates, nothing is as simple as gaining a windfall ... and simply moving forward with your old familiar life patterns. As basic readers, most of us can't fathom the pitfalls and liabilities of making public statements. Takeing every Next Step opens a new, unforeseen opportunity to trip and get hurt, or that could impose on another's feelings. That said, I join the thousands who continue to read and learn about the powerfully talented author, JammyJimmy, and strongly encourage more scripts. We know you haven't stopped ... Completely

I lay here at 720 am finished with this well written piece of literature. I spent since 1 am reading and couldnt stop. The way you put the characters and story line together made for a great read. I know a lot of people come to literotica for a quick jerk off but you bring the side of erotic literature that literotica needs more of. I would also like to say that I hope you have a second part to this because if you do I will be there to read it.

I'am 66 yo. I'am tetraplegic and mute. And I can't stop reading. I am brasilian. I learn a lot of english to. Thanks a lot for this history.

Is anyone else thinking that this would make an excellent Hollywood film. You could dial down some of the sex scenes add a little more action, have the actual stars make a guest appearance and BAM! You have your excellent "trouble in paradise" movie theme. I'd go see it.

This was by far the best story I've ever read on this site and I can't help but want more. To simply put it amazing, thank you

you should get this poublished

Will there be a sequel?

Good pacing and great plot! The characters were fairly realistic lending some real cred to the story.

My main critique is that American readers will know Kyle and Patricia etc... are not American right away due to word choice and odd turns of phrase. Americans are never "keen" to do something and I've only heard the word "dodgy" in British comedies or Sherlock Holmes send-ups. The British spellings were distracting too: organization, favor, color are easier to believe in a story mostly about Americans.

His blog has been silent for over a year and supposedly he was getting over some type of illness before he stopped all communication with anyone.

read more of the stories on this site and you will find the book of David excellent story kind of similar

Follow up, Follow up, Follow up, Follow up.....

Wow very interesting and amazing read....can't wait for part two. Lol

JJ, I must compliment you on this story, it has captivated me from the start. You have an amazing talent with words. I look forward to reading more of your work. As others have said...

More...More...More...please

Reading this story has been a great pleasure. I appreciate the research you must have done and the absence of spelling and grammar errors. The only error I detected was Scuba tanks containing oxygen. At depths greater than 30 feet, oxygen is toxic. Scuba tanks contain compressed air. Please remember that when you write the much hoped for sequel. ;-)

Very well done. look forward to a contiuation of this story.

Excellent read...absolutely MUST do a sequel...PLEASE!!!

I've been reading stories here for years and this is the best ever. So far above anything else I've read it's like going from watching a t-ball game in the afternoon to watching a 9th inning 2 down home run for the Cubs to win the world series.

Wow... what I was expecting... it was great... I mean I'm only on the 16th or so page but it's brilliant, it is a great read and I thoroughly enjoy it. I wouldn't mind there being a sequel, but without knowing what the ending is I wont be able to say for sure, loving it so far!

If it were possible, I'd rate this as 9* (out of 5*)

It would have been 10* but how long is it until we get the next installment?

Earl John [:-)>

I really looked forward to reading the next set of pages in this very long story. Not ever being rich or famous, I never gave any thought to all of the headaches that such a position brings with it when it also involves running lots of large companies. For any person who cares about people it can be a very big responsibility.

It was also great that the sex was nicely threaded throughout of the story and it was not out of place. In too many of the stories on Literotica it is so crudely forced onto every page that the plot and characters become secondary at best.

Very well done.

Thank you !

Honestly, just publish this into a book. I would buy 10 copies just so i would know i would always have it if something happened. This story compleatly captivated me. I devoured this story. In a way im at loss for words.... Hell, i copied and pasted it into my notes app so i could always have it right at my fingertips. And I hope there is a sequel soon. Real soon. You have some serious talent. :) thanks for writing it

I dont even like smut stories.. but this one.. this one blew me away... I couldn't quit reading it. You, sir, have one hell of a gift.

This was amazing to read. The story was set up perfectly and it was easy to read.

A real page turner! has its own body, well written, and transcends well, Lovely characters, well told story!

I hope a publisher will pick this up and put it out there in print for you. This is a fine piece of work! You should be compensated for the effort.

As an editor, I was blown away by your writing. it was well thought out, with terrific character development. I would love to see a screenplay of this.

Hell, truth be told, I'd love to play Kyle in the TV series. :-)

Excellent work! Never in my life had I read a story well plotted and it kept me glued to the story for the last few days until I finished reading the the entire story. I would like to get updates from you and eagerly waiting for your next post.

manmadhaleelalu@yahoo.com

I just finished reading this for the second time. Even knowing what was going to happen I was still totally engrossed and never left my seat. Great writing. I hope you have plans to continue the adventures of Kyle, Katie and Kara.

I have read this story multiple times and love it each & every time. Now you are probly sick of hearing this, but dam please give another installment of this.

I was interested in your story, and I am sure sometime or another I will read it however right now I feel no urge to do so and the reason why is smoking.

It might seem strange to think that a story in the incest section would turn a person off when talking about smoking but that is what has happened.

First off the biggest thing to me is the idea that a person who has struggled to quit smoking would so effortlessly go back to it. There was no struggle no indecision no cravings at all to speak off.

Secondly to think that with all the knowledge of smoking and its side effects not to mention that his personal assistant who is tasked with making him presentable to the world would not mention at all the downside of smoking to him even if she smokes herself.

Finally I can understand if someone smokes and it is a character trait honestly I do. But you seem to go out of your way to point it out at ever chance you get. Why you do this I do not understand. This seems gratuitous to me there is no reason for it. It does nothing to advance the story. Do you mention ever time he has to urinate or cough or sneeze no you don't so why mention smoking at all ?

Thank you for an entertaining, detailed story.

its that good

Whats the conclusion

I could not put it down You left it open enough for many more chapters which from your talent I hope you continue.I would enjoy reading how their lives proceeded over the next few months years and decades

Dave

loved it and could hardly stop reading it to sleep at night well done.

I just read again your story. It's a great story and I enjoyed it so much I had to read it again. I know you haven't posted anything in two years and wondering if you plan to? I also would like to know if you had any plans to continue this story? You left it open with so many questions. Like what proceeded over the next few months years and decades. Hope you continue it.

Unbelievable well written! Didnt want it to end!!

Thank you for that.

I really didn't want it to end. I'm hoping that you'll post up more of this series as soon as possible.

Great story and well written. I couldn't put it down. The characters were real and three dimensional. When I hit the end I felt as though a friend of mine had just departed and I was left wondering what to do. Please write a sequel.

You are a great writer. Enjoyed the story very much. Please continue. Thanks

Now that was good. Beter than most. Thank you very much for sharing.

Best story ever on this or any other website. Wish Patricia were not so kinky. Great read.

Didn't even need the sex, found myself skipping it back to the story

Nicely written, well balanced and Hot in places! Loved it! Bit of a marathon reading 42 pages though, and it did seem to end rather suddenly.

Great story. You really need to write a novel. I do like how Patricia was a little wild for him, but was able to be together. It leaves him open for other relations later on. I hope there will be more.

Needs to be a movie. awesome story!

Sir,

This was hands down the best story I ever read in my years on this site. Thank you. I sincerely hope that you will post a sequel. Again thank you, you are a very talented writer.

Cheers!

thank you for writing this story, thank you

That was amazing! Mystery, intrigue, sex, romance, edge of your seat thriller action and then a gentle wind down to the end. Very well written. Thank you! Best story I've read on this site.

Kept me reading till I was done. Great story.

This novella has it all! Romance, mystery, intrigue, sex! Threads is wonderfully balanced, with just enough conflict to move the story forward. I love character-driven fiction, and you crafted each personality superbly. Well done!

I want to offer a quick word about editing. For a writer of your caliber, there were some mistakes that were quite annoying. Spell checkers don't catch everything. Enough said about spelling.

One instance of bad grammar that was repeated several times was a phrase like, "me and Ed did this," or "me and Casey did that". A business man would never utter such a phrase. Of course, the correct phrases would be "Ed and I," or "Casey and I".

There were other problems, but none ruined your wonderful story. I only mentioned it because you should know. I'm also quite anal!

I gave you five stars!

Plz do a follow up thread on where they go from here

This is just great. I feel like there should be a movie made out of it

I couldn't stop reading, what a great story, even with some typos, but WOW great story. I agree it should be made into a movie.

Long but good. Some excellent twists and turns

It's a shame the next story never happened.

I only got 2 and a half hours of sleep one night because I couldn't stop reading this. Despite my sleep deprivation I urge you to please POST ANOTHER SOON!!

JD

Wow..... I would say kudos to you for the great work here, I just can't stop till i saw the last letter of the write-up.... Keep it up...

Moscode!

Loved it! I have read it several times and still love it! Sequel please!

Please... Puh-LEASE!!! The story sounds so interesting you could've actually written a novel, without the sex. I loved every bit of it. Please continue the story. I would love to know what would happen when they go about on their jobs. especially kyles, who he has to hook-up with, etc.

I have a lot of stuff going on this week and then I stayed up late 2 nights in a row just to finish this and it was worth every minute of nodding off the next day. Great work and I hope to see more in the future!

I honestly have to say that this was one of the best stories I have read in a long time. Your character development and over all plot was outstanding. You managed to show all the characters in the story grow in their own way, while also allowing the reader to place some of their own thought in at a sub level. Excellency is all that I can say about the story.

Best story I have ever read on here. You have the gift, I would be happy to pay for this book.

I agree with just about everyone here, this is the best story on here and I agree also if this was a book I would definitely buy it. I would also love to see where this story goes into the future. How they all do with they're new lives. It's great

This story was so good, i didn't even fap reading it, despite the fact that i had a boner most of the time..

I can always tell if I enjoy an author by the visualization I mentally "see" as I read the words on paper or the screen.. Thank you for the time I spent with you it was a real pleasure.

This story is the first "book" that I have read in over forty years and I was totally taken in by the style of writing. It was an incredible experience, to say the least. I must find time to read more by the author. It is so well written that I actually felt like I was "in" the story experiencing it rather than just reading it. WELL done.

I will say, amongst the best novels I've read of late, but alas, I would wish for a sequel. I think the writing was stunning. I had a hard time going to sleep as I read this non-stop for 2 ½ days. I would really Like to say how good this is and how I would love to see more relating to this or even a sequel! Thanks for writing and posting!

Just spent the day reading this. So well written! You have a real gift...love to see a sequel!

JammyJimmy,

Write some books, you have some talent here, threading in & out never dropping off. Whatever your day job is must not keep your brain cell vibrating enough and you excel here extremely well. Excellent writing skills with some great exotic & erotic with the story lines. Rock on!!

just finished reading it and all i can saw is wow

didnt even speed read or skip any of it that was unreal ultimate kudos mate well

done and definitely keep at it and actually if you can id definitely like to hear more about the story....

the story is incredible! Are there any update regarding threads the island??

Amazing, Fucking amazing!!! Please take this to print! Bestsellers list for sure. One think that would have made a great addition was what the girls' were doing on the island when they weren't with Kyle, I would love to know who they were fool in around with on the island.

Awesome. Loved the detail.

Fantastic you should really become a legitimate writer the sec scenes were great but if you left out the graffic sex it would still be a great story

I read the entire 42 files in one sitting

Please allert me to any new files.

Of course you are now added to my favorites, both story & athur.

Absolutely loved this story. It's like 5% sexy 95% just a GOOD story. I was so sad when it ended. There's so many more places to go with this. I'm dying for more. Best I've ever read here.

Now now now... This has to be the finest story I have ever read in my whole life! Superbly written and gripping.. I read this story for 4 hrs straight without even getting up... Excellent, superb, fantabulous.. I have a suggestion, plzz continue this story from where u have left off here... I have become a big fan of urs and would simply love it if u continue this story.. To inform u, I am a Literotica editor so feel free to seek my services as I am always available to such fabulous writers like u.. :D

IN THE END, EXCELLENT!!! :D

AWSOME! This is the best story I have ever read, not just sex but great storyline too.

You gotta continue the story man!! I know its been long since it was posted. But wth!! Best story I have ever read!! First time posting a comment for a story just cuz I loved it!!!

This is a great story. Would be fantastic to be continued but sets a high standard to top.

Please write more, encore! Encore!

such a good story, got so stuck into it i stayed up till very late tring to get that last part of reading in. would be a life i could get used to thats for sure.

I love it to the moon and back!

Absolutely a great story. Do you intend to follow on with other chapters? Would love to read them. Took me three days to read but couldn't stop.

I couldn't stop reading this. I need more. I hope a sequel is coming soon. You could publish this and probably get some more publicity (if you are looking for it). Keep up the great writing and don't listen to the haters.

Excellent story, very well written, and loved the plot twists. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff.

Squibber

Well written and engrossing. Kept going back to read another chapter instead of doing stuff I was supposed to be doing. Almost missed one client deadline. Thanks for the entertainment.

You're very young (or you were a very young when you wrote this story) - JammyJimmy? - Yes??

There needs to be a series of sequels to this! I love your characters and the way they were all developed and intertwined. Keep this story going! It is very entertaining and fun to follow.