All Comments on 'Three Demons Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hot Damn

Good god, why is Everett so hot. Beautifully written as always! Also can't wait to get deeper into the lore of everything. And the dirty bits are just UGHHHH <333

Keep it up!

GuiltyGrindGuiltyGrindover 8 years ago
!!!

Never before have I ever been so into a story on Literotica, especially since you focus on how the guys look and act and how absurdly attractive they are. And among that, having an interesting storyline too. Keep up the wonderful work, I always look forward to your new chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Expected the "big reveal" - but wow - what an interesting, captivating backstory

Of course I knew there was something otherworldly about Freya and the 3 guys, but aliens? This opened a whole new world I was not expecting and was a most pleasant surprise. The story of Freya's origins is really interesting - though for "royalty" she can be quite a brat. I am surprised that her human Mom behaves as badly as she does - though she paid a really high price. I suspect a lot more will become clearer in ensuing chapters, and am eagerly looking forward to them!

luv2read2

CalyPyCalyPyover 8 years ago
Almost perfect

I hace you 5 stars but i felt The end was abrupt and incompleta, like you didnt know what el se to say without going another parte more. The story as always brilliant. Everret should know that out of the 3 she only had sex with him, only teased with The others. He deserves to know he still is a little special.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Luv it

As usual your story continues to be beyond amazing! I have read each chapter at least 3 times. You have a good balance of naughty & nice!

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteover 8 years ago
Thank you for this

Love the connection, and the backstory so very interesting... Your details are incredible .... I am in love with these characters... cannot wait for more...but definitely will

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More

Everything about this is so interesting and hot too. Wow

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
please write more

I love this story and check every day to see if there is a new chapter. I want to know what comes next....please write more!

LadyBug19LadyBug19almost 8 years ago
Love it

Don't leave me hanging please write more. I love this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
More please

I love this story. I keep checking back to see if there is more. It feels unfinished.

sinistertwin86sinistertwin86over 5 years ago

Love this story... I wonder how intense sex will be with the other two. Will everret share her?

StrixalucoStrixalucoabout 2 years ago

Dammit, once again a brilliant story unfinished. PLEASE do come back to this and write the rest!

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