by Contrarian
I can't wait for your next installment. The delicious way you spin classic fairy tales is magical.
The 1st story left off with a girl lying naked outside a tent, and this begins with another girl clothed and wanting. Seems you forgot what was written in the first story. 4 year gap. Disappointing.
The first story was really good, this one kind of jumped and it took me awhile to catch up to where we had gone. It was a little disappointing, but not a bad story