All Comments on 'Three Falls, One Bitch'

by H-Bard-kun

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Absolutely loved it!

Looking forward to more stories from you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
more please

lol, that was wonderful, playful, entertaining, just great.

i will be looking forward to more, possibly following along with this!!!

LiterateRoticaLiterateRoticaover 17 years ago
Well done

You write well, and you don't rush things. And I like what you're into. I enjoyed this very much - keep writing!

secretfreak0728secretfreak0728over 17 years ago
Awesome Story!!

I have to admit the end made me laugh. I hope there is a chapter coming after this..

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Tasty.

Now if only you'd written it as fast as you did well, we'd be in -business.-

I'll be on your ass until you write the next installment, too, my little he-bitch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Well done!

Great job. I really hope you plan a sequel to this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Fucking Fantastic

Great work, apologize for the expletives, but hey nothing emotes congrats on a good story like cursing!!!!

asiaprofasiaprofover 17 years ago
Super...

Especially the twist

In the tail of the tale...

storm_usmcstorm_usmcover 8 years ago
Great story

Just needs to be longer, really good plot

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