by The_Technician
...I have to say that I'm pretty disappointed. It was a very short tale with a very simple plot. Nothing like the Skiing series, which I really liked.
Just love your stories and the skiing trip was superb.
This was a bit short and sharp and lacked the eroticism of the previous stories.
It seemed almost to be rushed out to meet a deadline.
Please continue as you are one of my look for authors, but a bit heavier on the detail next time ...lol
So that was totally unexpected. It made me smile, good work.