All Comments on 'Three Minutes and Twenty Seconds'

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burningloveburningloveover 7 years ago
Nice story! Nice read!

I like stories that are realistic and to the point! You don't mince words and get to the point!

5 stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hilarious Ending

I laughed out loud at the end. Nice job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story, but I'd put it in Romance or even Non-erotic, not Erotic Couplings...

Like I said...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
a big dick

Cant compete with big money, well, at least untill after the marriage anyway. 4

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Young

The worm came off best in the end .

Good story enjoyed it very much.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Wonderful!

~ For all of us dorks in high school,this story was perfection!

~ For all of her popularity,class,good looks,it was a big dick that Jeannie saw as her passport to happiness. (Ballroom dancing,indeed!

~ {The dork got onto the elevator at the Waldorf Astoria and promptly said to the elevator attendant,"Ballroom,please." The prom queen in front of him turned,smiled and said,"Sorry,I didn't realize that I was crowding you." }

~ GREAT,ironic ending and worth a 5+ rating!

swingerjoeswingerjoeover 6 years ago
Excellent

What a fun and enjoyable story! Thanks for contributing.

EzrollinEzrollinabout 6 years ago
a change of pace...

Something different and well written...wasn't sure how it would end but I knew it had something to do with a big dick.

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FantasyXY - aka Fantasy Man (Men have the XY chromosome) I enjoy writing erotic stories and am not afraid to experiment. I also have what some have called a wicked sense of humor. Most of my stories are done tongue-in-cheek. A good bit of my stuff is pretty bad, but you m...