All Comments on 'Three Nights in Prague Ch. 01'

Loved this story. One of my favourite things is to have a girl sit on my face and make me eat her ass. Looking forward to reading more.

Good premise.

But the "normal" sex it began with wasn't erotically told. Too matter-of-fact.

And the ass fucking was too strightforward. She didn't rub her clit while he had his tongue up her ass. She didn't play with his cock and balls then either.

Four stars. Could have been five.

Thanks for the feedback. Reading it back, I realize it does come across this way. Hopefully I'll manage to fix those parts a little in the future.