All Comments on 'Three of Us'

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isearch4uisearch4uover 9 years ago

Love the idea of 2 cocks!

erotikoserotikosover 9 years ago
First person stories...not good.

First person stories are generally not favored, and this is no exception. It would be much better written in the third person. That being considered, it was still an excellent effort and I gave it a five star rating.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 8 years ago
erotikos is wrong

I think 1st person stories are the best. Lets me into the story teller's head. Much more sensual.

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