All Comments on 'Three Tales: Wifey, Girl And Hubby'
by NonStopFunGuy
- 10 Comments
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoYay, welcome back. I love your stories and am delighted to read this great tale. Please keep up your writing. 5 star vote. Thanks
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoBut the husband is a total douche. Kept hoping something bad was going to happen to him.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoSo glad you're writing again! Please give us another one soon.
Anonymousover 9 years agoYour story was hot, hot, hot! I love stories where a wife gives her hubby some fresh pussy. There was one distracting error throughout the story that is easily fixed. You used the word y'all incorrectly a lot. Y'all is when you are speaking to more than one person. We still use you if we are speaking to one person. For example, if Amy was speaking to Kelli and said, "Do y'all wanna get fucked?" This would imply she was asking this question to Amy and someone else. "Do you wanna get fucked?" Would be more appropriate. I've lived in Texas my whole life and I'm pretty sure we invented this particular slang word. Keep writing more stories for us!
Anonymousover 8 years agoYour story was Shit,Shit Shit !! One of the worst on Lit ! There is not iota of writing skill at all ! I suggest you change your hobby back to wearing panties.
Lil_kittyalmost 5 years agoReally enjoyed this story. I appreciate that the style changed based on the narrator and you captured the feel very well. Super hot story!
roveroneover 4 years agoloved it...31 yo superhot wife that hadn't hadn't '...licked another cunt...' since shortly after college...loved the first page, when she tells him to call her Kelli, and, 1 time in a billion, he does, and they both go over again...
5, and fave story, and def going to check out your other stories
quite surprised by the flamer...perhaps trying to compensate 4 having a microdick...
Anonymousabout 2 years agoUgh!!! I hate that this makes me wet but oh gosh I wish I was being fucked by a hot older married man right now! Sneaking around on his wife. Please give us an update MrNonStop. X
Anonymousover 1 year agoPlease give us another chapter of this! Where Paul and Kellie are shit talking and cuckolding the wife!
Anonymousover 1 year agoPlease give us an update’ This story made me so wet. Especially his and Kelli’s plans to meet up behind hide wife’s back!
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