All Comments on 'Three Virgins'

Work on the next part of what you started.

Stories where the characters are given almost limitless powers can easily go astray into boring recitals of their use and abuse of the powers.

What makes this story interesting is the uniqueness of each of the main characters. That makes me want to read more, and as you go forward, please stay focussed on the CHARACTERS.

Nice development of story line and charators. Would like a longer chapters, can't get enough.

Wow, three main characters! Been checking this site out for a while and haven't seen that 'til this one! Can't wait to read more!

Keep writing..it's like an erotic version of 'Heroes'! Loving it!

Can you please go back through and edit the thoughts so that they show up? They're there, in the page source... I had to view source to see what they're thinking.