by PrincessJezebel
I suppose you could add a kind of Epilogue, for balance? Moral of the Story, perhaps?
Cute concept. He seemed rushed in the prologue; however,
in context, it was okay.
YOU are a Very Naughty Princess, Jezebel.
Where "on the plains" and/or do you get to Music City USA? :+))
Well-written, fanciful, and almost-but-not-quite believable. I like it!