All Comments on 'Three's Company'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Spicy!

Very well written and I look forward to more from this author.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More!!

Found a book Sandy C. Jayne and D. Allen on Amazon. It looks like a book of short erotic stories!

https://www.amazon.com/gp/aw/d/1978418655/ref=mp_s_a_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1510086420&sr=8-1&pi=AC_SX236_SY340_FMwebp_QL65&keywords=bedtime+stories+his+words#

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Bought the book!!! Whoa!

Thanks for the other person saying where to find it. Just ordered the book. Looks like it’s well written. It says 1st in a series, so is it fair to say we will get another soon?

mikeswivesmikeswivesover 6 years ago
Where is the begining?

Credit given for the writing talents. Flows well and has the visuals described well and the conversation smooth and natural. But, where is the drama. It reads like the second chapter where the first had all the ups and downs and character uncertainties and surprises and now we get to the part with the sex. Porn movies are like that, all action and no talk. I am sure this is exactly on target for many readers for whom the Lit in Literotica is like waiting for the commercial to end and the story to begin. For me, I kinda like the literary element in more than just technical talents. Hope I made a positive and useful comment.

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