by JenniferLassalleEdwards
I hope he gave her the exact kind of spanking she needed and desired!
I loved this one -- thank you, and welcome to Literotica. I am sure you are going to be very popular here if this, your first story, is anything to go on!
Five stars!
I have been truly nervous to push the submit button...and to even look if there were comments. You are too kind!
JLE
A bit of everything and all done very well. I'm a fan of kink, realism and a good HEA. You delivered on all fronts.
An amazingly wonderful, flawless story that establishes you as a talented and imaginative writer. I hope the reaction to this first offering of yours encourages you to submit many more. It was so classy that I do believe you could have fleshed it out some more and sold it as an e-book on Amazon. FIVE STARS for sure!
I am toying with the idea of exploring Akiyo's story and journey of self-discovering into the life of BDSM.