All Comments on 'Through the Window Ch. 01'

Very nice writing style, and a very erotic voyeur story. what's not to like??

A very nice story well written with prospects for more episodes and what a location for them.

Little more can be said, for now! Brilliant submission, promising better to come, this reader hopes?

Well told, sensual. Small item: I think you mean "ministrations" rather than "administrations" in the 1st sentence of the 5th paragraph.

Well written and a nice development of the characters, even though we really only know much about one of them so far. Looking forward to your post of chapter two.

Wonderfully written. Erotic without being smutty. Looking forward to more from you.

Thanks for sharing.

If anyone's looking for the second part of this, it's filed under 'Erotic Couplings'.

http://www.literotica.com/s/through-the-window-ch-02

with you all the way into the forbidden