All Comments on 'Through the Woods Ch. 03'

That's some fine writing!

What is there to say, except for 'Thank you, and please have five stars.'?

Well done -- more please!

To quote When Harry Met Sally, "I'll have what she's having." And does Master have a brother?

Well written, Alice. Technically clean and wonderfully descriptive without purple prose. Even better than giving us the fly-on-the-wall sense of observing, you give us a seemless opportunity to step into these roles vicariously. Brava.