by woodmanone
Spent a long weekend in New Braunfels last summer at a family reunion. Cool little city. I liked this story, and it seems to be pretty accurate historically. I'd like to see it continued.
Nice story. Would've like more about their romance back in 1878 though.
Very enjoyable and entertaining. Thanks for sharing.
Lovely stuff - well written, interesting, believable - well, almost. Keep on going. xx
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Just reread this, still as good as on the first reading. I am glad you're writing again. I'm hoping that you will perhaps do some stories around Sgt Major O'Flynn from your Tumbleweed story. Then too pretty much anything using the characters from any of your other westerns would make fine reading as well. There are just not enough writers giving us readers great westerns these days. Thanks for doing your part in seeing that fans of the genre don't lack for something decent to read.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story! You packed quite a punch into only four pages.
I love this one even though I rarely read non erotic. Funny thing is I always skim over the truly hot sections because they are ALL THE SAME. I'm hooked on Romance and incest stories even tough incest is and never has been in my mind mom/son and sis/bro are the best I never read father/dau it's repulsive to me. I can't stomach gay of any sort. I have read Loving Wives many times, but had to quit because they hurt me and I can't sleep even after reading one story. I can't stand cheating, it hurts me too much.
Thanks for this story! I loved it...
Love your stories. Love your ethics.
But, I'm sorry. I just have to tell you how much it diminishes a good story to have poor grammar disrupt a beautiful story line you have so masterfully crafted.
"Though" cannot take the place of "tough" in a sentence and have it make any sense.
Likewise, "quite" cannot be used when "quiet" is needed to complete a thought.
"Passed" and "past" are similar. "Your" and "you're" make a statement have a different meaning when used improperly.
Thank you for your most excellent stories.
de Jay
But your westerns are the best. This one, brings to mind a little of the cultural changes that have taken place in our land in the last 130 years, heck, in the last 60 years. My granddad would relate more to the 1870s than to my kids world. Sometimes I think I would too. Good story , as always. Happy trails to you.
I believe I enjoyed this more than the other things of yours I have read. Good job.
jtaylor
The changes were handled with just enough information.
In a way I was hoping Abby had a similar experience. But this works just as well.
Thanks
Good story, I like the reaction to the warm beer. I had a similar one when I was stationed in Germany back in the early 70s. Except it wasn't really warm, more like room temperature, and since it was a cool (temp wise) area, and central heating wasn't that common, the beer was cool rather than cold.
Really enjoyed it, not normally a fan of Westerns or time travel but this really was a treat.