All Comments on 'Thrown By the Garter'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

I think I got it. The use of Amanda to throw us off track. Had to read the last section twice to get the Rosie/Marie thing.

Very good story. Very, very clever.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good story

Erotic and entertaining. Well done!

JLCCJLCCover 9 years ago
awesome!

Seemed like you peered into my mind, and my view of today's casual woman. I was only a little put off at the drugging, not really my bag, but it served a noble purpose.

The twist at the end was contrived but outstanding!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Such a fun twist!

Great story.

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