All Comments on 'Thug Lovin''

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Translation please.

you're trying to hard to be ghetto...rewrite it in English please...

I want to like this, but please translate it. I like the premise, but I want to like this more.

Thank you.

I enjoyed the story! The language sounded real to me. If I didn't know the slang, the inference was enough for me to figure it out. Stories start to read the same on this site, and I found this refreshing, I like the humor -- "I bent over to get a nothing that was on the floor" made me giggle -- and my only complaint is that it wasn't longer. Keep writing!

2 Stars at best, I think it could have been more if we could understand more of it.

Lots of missspelling...and I don't mean "wit". Your use of slang...attempted use of slang, didn't make your story more authentic. It made you seem like a moron. I was more offended than aroused. Try again.

Its OK but could be better

Keep writing and don't stop just got gold on your hands.

Love it love it,love it!!!!!!!

Nothing wrong with this. Those who can relate will love it

The slang was authentic, those that know will enjoy

Loved it; I wish that would happen to me. There were some errors in grammar, but as an English teacher and after scoring numerous papers on state assessments, I can tell you that the errors would not count against you because it does not take away from the content of the story. Try reading some of the papers that I have graded, then you'll know what I mean.