All Comments on 'Thursday Afternoon on the Ranch'

OMG - GREAT story. I loved it! It kind of struck home. I used to be a farmer. My college roommate was a rancher in CO and I visited often. This type of scenario has always been a part of my fantasy set. AND I love thunderstorms! Keep up the good work,

I loved your story. It was great. But what I loved most is the fact that you had in Eastern Oregon and that you got everything right. I grew up there and new exactly what you were talking about. I love that you even included the towns and got them right.

Had a ranch in the northwest corner of Colorado, near the town of Maybell. Cattle & sheep. The Avon Lady like to run round neked, so we did!!!

Had the sheep wagon rocking plenty of times. Her favorite was "CowGirl UP"!!

Thanks for the memories.

You should write many more stories like this because they are a pleasant read and

I really enjoyed this one.

I am so glad I found your story. Ain't nothin' hotter than an Oregon cowboy... except maybe his wife.

It was well written and I enjoyed it very much.

Saying "Met in college a dozen times, still means you only went to college once."

She thought/ he thought is good only if you choose different words to say or mean the same thing. Redundancy is boring.

You may love the scenery, but you should only mention it twice or three times at the most. Hearing about sage and fence posts is also BORING.

I gave you three stars because there were NO Spelling Errors.

Quite a few writers would end it when the sex was done. The fact that you added the post-coital paragraphs was fantastic. Thanks for the great story.

Great story need more like this

KEEP WRITING!