All Comments on 'Thursday Rendezvous'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Beautiful and erotic but Lifeless!

This is a very beautiful and highly erotic account of two very passionate and tender lovers whose love-making is described in minute detail. As such it was highly arousing sexually. It is a first rate stroke story.

But - and it is a very big but - we know virtually nothing about these two people, we don't know who they are or where they come from in what you call the 'real world' And so they hardly come across as flesh and blood human beings. And this makes your story a bit lifeless!

Robertodavo aka Robert Davidson

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