All Comments on 'Thylacine Alpha Ch. 01'

by GforGraham

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tattooed_cowgirl15tattooed_cowgirl15over 6 years ago
Got my interest

I like the new were species aspect, being Aussie myself it's great reading this. I will look for the next chapter eagerly

GrendralGrendralover 6 years ago
Good read so far

Nice start looking forward to seeing more is the pack land set roughly margret river way by any chance

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good beginning

Set the scene well

Explained the characters origins and genetics

Left us with ?s

1Will he turn Jess?

2 Did Reg assassinate his parents?

3 will Dave challenge Reg?

3.1 of course he will

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I like it!!

Thank you for a different were breed.. there's too may were wolf stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Keep it going....

Definitely enjoying this story - especially the Aussie theme with Were-Thyla's and Devils. Looking fwd to reading this story as it unfolds. Please continue. Cheers

GforGrahamGforGrahamover 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks for those who have voted and left comments. I appreciate the support.

Yes, the setting is Western Australia and the pack home is located within the tall tree forests in the south west. I have not bothered too much with real geography, instead just used it as a basis for the locations. The parking area is based on one I have been to that has a gazebo shelter, but cannot recall exactly where in Australia it was. I can only say it definitely is not in Queensland as have never been there. The guys just needed somewhere to take cover and this setup came to mind.

I am writing part 2 now and hope to have it out real soon, just editing it myself and filling in the gaps and fleshing out descriptions. This takes longer than writing the basic story. Got sidetracked on research for another story and lost a lot of time.So shelved the other for this one for the time being.

FalconsverseFalconsverseover 6 years ago
Great story

I love it and need to see more please!

Littlecat76Littlecat76over 4 years ago
The Tasmanian devil is not thylacine

Thylacine refers to the Tasmanian Tiger not a group of animals, the devil is certainly not considered thylacine.

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