All Comments on 'Tick Tick'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Now That

Was erotic, and well written, thanks, I needed that.

dmwriterdmwriterover 14 years ago
Go Girl!

Well done. A longer tale with more erotic details next time. Keep 'em cumming.

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 14 years ago
Erotic and familiar.

Well-done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
like a dream

Very erotic... surreal. A bit lack intensity. In real sex, no matter how gental a man or a woman wants the love making to be, they long and need the violent eruption near the end -- the earth shaking, the deafing groaning, the irregular breathing, the rythmic pounding and grinding, all accompany the eruption of the hot lava from and within the depths of the magma chambers. ...

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