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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

So many questions. Your story is a tease.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Huh?

Confusing to say the least

sarobahsarobahabout 8 years agoAuthor

Confusing? Fair enough. The story is supposed to be a play on the concept of Casual Friday.

draig_OMalley2draig_OMalley2about 8 years ago
Very cleverly done

This piece is very well written and cleverly done. The author is exceptional at knowing how to pace the story, an essential ingredient to good erotic writing. The playfulnedss of the story is subtle and even-keeled, easily inviting the reader to pretend it is real -- which is the essence of good writing or any other art.

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