All Comments on 'Tie Your Mother Down!'

…..does not seem to receive SEVERUSMAX'S stories from other planets!

While the storyline is good, all the names thrown out made it very confusing. Maybe start a series and introduce characters slowly but steadily. Hope there is more to come of this story.

I need a scorecard to figure out who the hell is playing!! Severely unorganized and rambles too much. ***

You stories would be much more reader-friendly if there was a sequential order, as in "Title, Chapter 1", "Title, Chapter 2", and so on. Especially for a prolific author, tracking down the preceding story(s) to put this one in context is a task which would probably consume more time than your typical reader is willing to invest. Why are you being so obstinate on this issue?

I will try to read this again and figure it out, but damn there are way to many people involved. Throwing names out there one after the other without having a clue as to what happened when???? This felt like I started watching a soap opera in the middle of the 3rd season without having seen any other previous episodes.

part of a series, or is there some background somewhere else?

It took a little research to uncover it, but it was worth it. Here is the series:

1) Tear it Up

2) Fat-Bottomed Girls

3) Don't Stop Me Now

4) Headlong

5) Play the Game

6) Tie Your Mother Down

Give it up! The first paragraphs were so confusing as to make it impossible to read. Thought I as reading a telephone directory with all those names and no characterisation / relationship or context being given. Complete rubbish. Sorry to be harsh.