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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
oh boy

the fun starts now...such wicked details.thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Need more time to develop the story

She went from accepting a drink to asking the guy to be her master far too soon. You should spend more time developing things but overall I like how you write.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Writing With Insight

I thought this story was well written. Women in their late 20's through 40's

want older men. Someone that knows how to treat a woman to bring out

the inner sexy submissive. I look forward to your next article.

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