All Comments on 'Tiffany Lynn Smith'
by Bertron
- 15 Comments
Anonymousover 15 years agoGet an editor. Your writing needs someone to look at it. Secondly, what is with the 12inch dick? and why the hell doesn't she talk to her husband? Instead she becomes a black cock slut and probably more than that later. But as always with these stories stupid married white woman do stupid things with black man. Done before a 1000 times and done much better.
Anonymousover 15 years agoThis story was pretty good, you just need to edit it properly. Would love for you to continue it.
Anonymousover 15 years agoDon't listen to the previous jerk cause this story rocks! please write more!
Anonymousover 15 years agoCould be better, don't get carried away with size. I did enjoy it please carry on and write more chapters.
Anonymousover 15 years agoI can only hope that there will be a continuation of this story...and i'm sure Tiffany does as well...
steviecomover 14 years agoGot a feeling a beautiful white wife is going to become a slut. Love it!!!
Anonymousover 12 years agoGreat story! but you need someone to edit it for grammatical mistakes.
Anonymousover 12 years agoHe is lucky to be able to tie his own shoes.
