All Comments on 'Tightening the Bonds'

by WantonWench

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Except when she went to sleep

He got dressed left the gag by her bed and never came back. You really think anyone would be dumb enough to go back? I hate stories where authors feel the need to make their characters dumber than rocks. No stars

LI KerwellLI Kerwellalmost 9 years ago
Well I Loved It

Your story actually hits a cord of truth. A lot of people try the Mistress/slave thing and it ends up like that. Few actually know how to fulfill their needs. Your characters did it well. 5 stars!!! Great story and well put together.

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