All Comments on 'Tiki Trouble'

I think this belongs more to the Mind Control area but I truly think, in all honesty, that it should be filed under Humor and Satire because that last line had me laughing my ass off!

Fetish gets passed down through generations. An elusive Master seems to be about ready to take over the world. A far out - fun Read! Terrific Write!

I thought that was great.

Hilarious, sinister and depraved. All the best qualities of light erotica!

That was a great story. Please supply some more with that subject.

You should follow - up on this story and let us know how many our Hero impregnates. and do the other Males except the new way.

But it needs to be Followed up on He could be the Stud for moms friends and Neighbors. Not to mention sis bringing fresh home from College. by the time everything is settled he would never have to Work. just what he wanted.

How ironic, a virgin teenage male happens to buy an idol that compels women to fuck him. Sounds like your typical teenage guy fantasy. That bit about neutering all the men not under the idols power did make me wince though.

Great story i think more descriptive and longer sex scenes is all thats missing

Pleasantly enjoyable. Would have been more [pleasurable if it focused more attention on the intimate details of the couplings. I had hoped that Katelynn would be inviting a few GF over for dinner and coupling with her brother.

Actually, too funny !!!

Thanks