All Comments on 'Tilley and Her Mom'

by forcryinourloud

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Fantastic and exciting. I LOVED it.

I can only hope this is part 1 of many erotic sexy parts. Mom enjoying her daughter and I hope she will soon be enjoying her daughter's mouth & tongue too. To say I loved this story w/b a huge understatement, I want more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
You bet

I go along with Anon in USA - you have to extend this situation that you've given us so that it fulfills the expectations that your writing skills have so far built up in us. Thanks for the pleasure you are giving us, and 'lang may ye thrie'', as Chaucer put it. Freddy

leann511leann511over 10 years ago
good story

Good story but your name is some kind of typo. Did you mean forcryinoutloud or forcryinoutlord?

leann

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Liked the Story

You did a good job building up to the mother daughter sex and that was very well done. Overall a (4). The story was way too short and what you have written deserves many more chapters. Consider extending this story.

Anonymous
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