by RibaldWriter
Dear Sir. Thank you for this story. I've always hoped to have a Master like Tim. I would love to become his best bitch ever. Your story even made me more submissive. I love this so much. Thank you Sir.
Julian needs to lose his cherry. Tim needs to help him. Your readers would love to read about that. Hmmmmmm? Good story. Thanks.
Glad to see you post a gay male story and it was just as good as the many other stories you have given us on other themes.
Hope you will follow up on this. There are all too few good writers posting stories on man to man sex.
I have never seen this bad story in a long time!! I mean I appreciated your effort you put into writing this but it is just incomprehensible. You made it look like gay guys are sex toys to be used by those so called STRAIGHT guys whenever they want like slaves to be exact. This is very offensive. If you want to write a gay story, there are more better ways than this. Also, your using of the word " Bit*h" in this story is overwhelmingly lot. Again, I appreciate your work but you can do better than this. Please don't be offended by this!!!
@Anonymous (02/09/17):
So very true. In reality, many are closed off and wouldn't want a damn with a straight guy, unless he proved he wanted something more than just a quick hump. But making gay stories is not easy. Most of them will be thumbs-downed or hated. If it's not futas, furries, or m/ffff, then "it sucks." Which makes writing erotica really disheartening unless you're into the mainstream stuff.
This could have been a cool story about a pair of roommates who made the best of a situation and helped each other out. Instead Tim was a selfish, disrespectful, nearly homophobic, asshole who wanted Julian as a human sex toy and nothing else. It wasn’t hot and made me mad that the Julian character accepted such treatment. Just because a guy has a big dick doesn’t mean he has to act like a big dick!