All Comments on 'Time Consumed'

by DeliriousMuse

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
very good

Very nice loved it. Should continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
No, please!

I like your story! It would be more exciting to have a series of almost caughts as they continue it in the office. Just my opinion!

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