All Comments on 'Time for Some Fun Pt. 05'

Hey, just stumbled across this in new submissions, and binged through all five chapters. I have to say, this is amazing! The way you demolished the fourth wall actually had me laughing out loud.

The chapters are shorter than I'd want personally and are kind of riddled with grammar errors, but not enough to turn me away from the great humor and actually interesting plot gimmick.

agreed, the 4th wall break was a lovely comic line.

Overall, I've been loving this story, it's both sexy and funny. Aria has a wicked sense of humour on her

The "multiple porns and a RickRoll" was absolutely the funniest shot I have read in a long time. Kudos. Keep up the great work!

The only story to ever tag Rick Astley....

This story gets me so fucking horny. Any chance of her doing more stuff with girls?

Would love to see some more of Aria humiliating the girls in front of the class, like we saw in part 1, but great story! I am really enjoying it so far!

Not the kind of think i usually look for to read but i started and glad i stuck with it, hope to read more.

Oh my God the whole Rick roll porn thing was hilarious, and nice 4th wall break

I don't think I've ever read a 4th wall break on this site. Very well done!

I started reading this for other reasons but kept reading it because it is so fucking entertaining. I loved it when you broke the 4th wall, and I love how comically everything seems to happen.

It was so funny I was laughing so hard I was crying I love stories like this.

yeah, felt a bit slow starting this series but, yeah, pretty entertaining after the awkward feels at start