All Comments on 'Time Once More for Marilyn'

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A good story well told. It is a distinct pleasure to read a coherent story written by an author proficient in English. This is no boring bar room story. However, there are a few errors in formatting the dialogue. These are composing errors that an editor could easily find and fix. Bravo, too, on the hot language of seduction that avoids overly clinical descriptions. Those of us with some years of experience know that the real heat in a story is in the prelude and anticipation, not so much in the doing. Strong work. I hope to read more of your work in the future. As an aside, I found Marilyn's directness regarding what she wanted and hoped for to be extremely erotic. No coyness here, just a mature woman who knows her mind, not wasting time.

Warm and heartfelt. A joy to read

Nicely done, Well plotted and written, researched for both place and time, interesting and believable characters, erotic without being overdone. Well placed in the categories. definiteley a 5, should be able to give bonus marks. Thank you for a good read.

Total agreement with the previous comments. A joy to read a well written story that is so much more than just a fuck fest. Congratulations and I hope to read more of your work soon.

The characters bubble across an extremely well-wrought back and really warm our hearts, except of course the mother-in-law.

It just doesn't get any better than this....

A master.

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SliperyRox

A great story, masterfully told.

If only I could write that well.

Hopefully just for now -

Your stories entertain and provoke thought - the best for any story to do - they also inform - at least a bit it seems on interesting areas in which I am ignorant - a pure bonus.

I wish there were 30 more to read - but will check back in hopes of finding at least one or two

Thank you so much for sharing your work and your thoughts.

You do write first rate top tier stories, one after another.

Reading all your stories...again. They are all top notch even though each is a bit different. These are, clearly, among the best tales on Literotica. Any chance for more?

everything this author has posted, indeed more than once for the great majority. There's nobody better on this site, and probably no one with such a consistently high level of excellence. May he continue to write for years to come.

Well, that seems to be a very diplomatic way to describe a perversion.

Anyway, that's a minor quibble, actually, in this otherwise nicely presented romance. Love lost.Love found.A lucky couple,in the end,to have at last found true love.

Thanks for sharing.

In my opinion, this is the best author on this site.

Good stories, consisantly good character development along with a wonderful geographic description of the story local.

Please continue!

well written, well told, well done.

thank you

p.s. I enjoyed the crossovers from Songbird.

Favorites.

Proper story telling, no crazy scarcely believable dialogue. So nice to read a U.K. based story too.

Well-told, literate and complete as far as the main characters are concerned.

I'd like to know what happened with Clarke, if only for the revenge . . .

Than You

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HP

At least, one more story with happy end (very happy, I need to say).

The tale are lovely, the description of the feelings are perfect, and the attraction across the years, between Marilyn and Dal, are greater than the time past.

5* for you.

I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

.....and fast becoming one of my favorites. Real sucker for good writing, appealing characters, Brits, and good endings.

Great stuff

You are a most accomplished storyteller

That is when I first read this. It was and is a great story and the author a master.

Written from a men’s point of view. Waste of space really

The writing and attitudes are very dated in this, plus there’s several loose ends in it (pun not intended fabric man), that all said, the Summer of ‘76 was the best the U.K. has ever had so not all nonsense.

Great stuff, totally disagree with the last negative comments, you wrote it like in period 1970's to 1980's, just lovely. And the sexist comment that you wrote it from the man's perspective only had me laugh out loud...some people here are just too funny; too bad they think they're serious. Thank you